Teacher Feedback

My teacher looked at my first final drafts and gave me some areas to improve my front cover, contents page, double page spread and planning and research. If I make all the changes given and continue to work the way I am, then I should be on track to achieving really high grades for this coursework.

The changes my teacher has suggested I make are:

Front Cover

•       Try making the main feature story smaller and adding another feature at either side of the image.
•       Make the text in the footer black.

Contents Page

•       Make the page numbers a bit smaller so I can add a few more stories to each section, this will make the page seem fuller.
•       Add a caption on each image explaining who they are and why they feature on the contents page.
•       Add a drop shadow on the main feature story.

Double Page Spread

•      Try using a different colour scheme, maybe red and black and compare this to your original.
•      Make the text a little bit bigger so it takes up the whole of the space.